Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Wolv All Over

            The chase was not very long.  She found the Wolv with its back to a big oak.  She snarled and growled at the beast as the hair on her back bristled with anticipation of a fight.  The Wolv growled a much deeper and more frightening growl in return and the claws popped out of its right hand like little daggers.  Its left hand, though, stayed pressed against the wound in its belly and what is more, the creature did not rise.  Valencia quickly realized that it could not rise.  That first shot must have been a lucky one that severed the spinal cord.  It was amazing the Wolv could get this far before collapsing.  The will to survive in order to kill another day, she decided

            Valencia took her human form and her armor returned to cover her automatically.  The Wolv stopped growling at the sight and then its big eyes got bigger when Valencia spoke in the ancient Humanoid tongue.  “It is time for you to die.”  The Wolv’s eyes could not get any bigger when Valencia went away and Diogenes came to stand in her place.  It was not that Valencia could not or would not do what was necessary, but Diogenes was the warrior and his cut would be swift, clean and sure.  He drew his sword.

            The Wolv struggled a bit but managed to put its head out to expose its neck.  Curiously, the Wolv had no fear of death at all.  It is not that they possess great courage.  It is likely they do not fully understand the concept of death.  In any case, the Wolv let one word escape its lips before the end.  It said, “Kairos,” so it knew its executioner.

            When it was finished, Diogenes went to one knee and asked the Wolv’s forgiveness as was his custom.  He cleaned his sword and put it where it belonged against his back.  Then he went away once again and let Valencia return because there was one more thing to do and after Glen, of course, this adventure belonged to the woman of Rome.  Besides, flying was easier than walking.

            When Valencia landed on the grounds of the dig, she tried not to look around.  She was glad the sun was not ready to rise.  She did not really want to see the bits and pieces of bodies scattered all over the place. 

            Valencia opened the door to the escape pod and stood back just in case.  It was likely the pod was programmed on landfall to trigger the one chamber first.  The others would be triggered automatically within a day or so unless the first one opened them early or decided they should not be opened at all.  When no Wolv came bursting out of the open door, Valencia went in. 

            Even with her werewolf eyes it took a bit to touch the right spots on the wall and turn on the internal lights.  Then she had to stop and think.  At last she determined that Dimitri had to come to this time and place once again.  He was from the far future and understood the systems and what made them work or not work far better than a girl from before Rome was even built.  A Woman from before Rome, Valencia corrected herself and then she went away and Dimitri went straight to the open chamber.

            He put his finger into a bit of the amnionic-cryogenic goop.  He sniffed like a wolf or a dog, but he knew what he was looking for.  As he suspected, it had degraded over two thousand years.  The Wolv was probably half-mad when it came out of its long sleep, like anyone could tell.  He felt that might explain why it had not bothered to open the other chambers.

            Dimitri looked in the other chambers.  Three were empty.  The fourth had a female in it, but he could tell just from looking at the syrup she rested in that it had degraded worse than the other.  The readout showed that there were still signs of life, but surely this one would be a blithering idiot if she was not brain dead already.  The last chamber had an infant in it.  The fluid looked good.  The signs of life looked strong.  Dimitri felt sorry for that because he knew what Valencia had in mind.  The reason was because it was what he had in mind, too.  It was the only option.

            Before that, Dimitri spent a good hour examining the ships systems to find out exactly how things worked.  There was no telling how important that might be in the future.  Then it also gave him a chance to remove certain bits and pieces—not enough to make the pod useless, but enough to make it unusable without their return.  Those pieces went on file in Avalon.

            He also figured out what happened two thousand years ago.  He saw the burnt out relays, relays which the Wolv would not know how to fix.  The main computer must have stalled at that point and without a return signal it must have decided there were no sleepers to resuscitate.  As a safety precaution, the chambers were designed to function independently of the mainframe in case there was a complete computer shutdown.  So the sleepers slept for all of those years. When Glen turned the power and the lights back on, the sequence went straight to resuscitation and did not go through the relays.  It was like an intruder alert system or something.

            Glen felt terrible about that.  He felt like he was personally responsible for getting all of those people killed even though every other life in time told him it was not his fault and he could not have known.

            “I can do it if you like.”  Dimitri offered.

            “No.  It is my job.”  Valencia answered, and Glen had no objection. 

            Valencia spent a long time looking at the Wolv baby.  She thought about her own babies—the orphan twins Saturn brought for her to raise.  In the end, one killed the other and poor Valencia never really got over that.  In this case she wondered what it might be like to suckle a baby again.  But here she knew this baby would suckle for about sixty seconds before it tried to eat her.  She had no choice, and with that thought she drained the fluid from both chambers. 

            The mother Wolv gave up her life immediately and Valencia decided that indeed she had already been brain dead.  The baby struggled as it drowned on pure air without the resuscitation procedure to make the necessary adjustments.  It struggled for nearly ten minutes, and Valencia thought of Papa Wolv, how it dragged its paralyzed hind quarters for half a mile before the paralysis and loss of blood forced it to stop.

            Once it was over, Valencia shut down all power in the pod, sealed the door and flew back to the Calveri house.  The sun was ready to rise by then but she had no trouble landing unnoticed.   She was a bit upset to realize her friends from Washington still had not arrived, but she was less upset when Miss Watson saw her and came running.  Valencia waited and hugged the woman before she went away.  Glen came back, not dressed in the armor of the Kairos but in the same clothes he wore when he left the house that evening.

            “It’s over,” he said.  “And there won’t be a repeat.”

            “Oh my God.”  Miss Watson put her hand to her mouth.  “You said six chambers.  I never thought of that.”

            Glen nodded.  “Now I have to go.  When my friends get here, I would appreciate if you did not tell them my name.  Just say the Traveler said not to give a name.  Tell them they will find the Wolv about half a mile that way and warn them of the grisly scene at the digs.  Tell them to put the pod in a shack out behind the new building, when they build it.  Tell them I’ll be by some day to pick it up so don’t mess with it.”  Glen got in the driver’s seat of the little Triumph.

            “Will I see you again?”

            Glen smiled.  “Tell them they need to take good care of you and the Calveris.  It has been a long night.”

            “But–” 

            “Who knows if we will meet again.  I have this memory problem, you see.  By the time I get home I probably won’t remember anything about what happened here except I will probably have nightmares for a while.”  Glen shrugged and backed out of the long drive.  About a half hour later he saw a van in the early morning light.  He thought the driver looked familiar but he was not sure.  He did notice the empty flatbed that was following. 

            By the time he got home, he was right.  He did not remember anything about what happened and he could give no answer to his parents about why he had gone off in the middle of the night or where he had gone or what he had been doing.  He was not allowed to use the car for a while, and while his gut said that was not fair, his mind could not say why.

Writerly Stuff: Newbies, Forums and on-line Groups.

Forums can be helpful to a writer – full of sage advice about the craft and how to handle some of the common problems that crop up in every writer’s life.  That is, of course, if you can find one that is not dominated by “the few” and keeps some people’s caustic attitudes in check. 

At the same time, the internet does not discriminate.  Not every peson on line is a well honed writer.  People with no particular experience or basis for their words can be equally quick to give advice.  Sometimes, that advice is sensible stuff, but sometimes it is way off base or perpetuates the kind of thinking about writing that must honestly be called “bad advice.”

So how can we know, especially if we are newbies?  Clearly if the internet does not discriminate, we must

There is a forum where I pop in from time to time.  A question was asked about the most common mistakes new writers make.  I feared, so before the line could fill up with tons of advice, I offered this top ten:

1.         Not writing (for whatever reason).

2.         Waiting for the muse or inspiration (or whatever) to strike.

3.         Dreaming about selling a million copies and winning the Nobel.

4.         Too much emphasis on characters at the expense of plot

5.         Too much emphasis on plot at the expense of voice and style

6.         Too much emphasis on voice and style at the expense of characters.

7.         Trying too hard to make a point (preachy)

8.         Wandering down every rabbit trail thinking it is a reflection of genius (pointless/boring)

9.         Giving up.

10.       Paying too much attention to what other people say, including this top ten list. 

You may or may not agree with the above, but I particularly want to point out number 10.  You see, any information gleaned on a forum or advice received from an on-line group or any writing blog, including this one, must be taken with a proverbial pound of salt.  Ultimately, you are the one who is writing your vision and you must decide how best to do that.  This is not to say the advice of other will never resonate with your soul.  But you must ultimately be your own writer and discover on your own terms if it works…or not.

My Universe: Alternate Worlds: The Second Heavens

The Apostle Paul was once taken up to the third heaven wherein was the Throne of God.  The first heaven, of course includes our sun and moon, the solar system and the innumerable stars beyond.  Somewhere in between, there must be something.  There must be a dividing line and it must be made up of what?

The second heavens is stated in the plural because various traditions have divided it into numerous levels or sections.  Sometimes, for example, the Throne of God is said to be in the seventh heaven, which would leave the second heavens divided into  five areas.  Sometimes Hell is said to be in the second heavens, like a prison area separated from the rest by a limitless, bottomless gulf.  (Sometimes Hell is itself divided into levels and said to be in a sub-heaven of its own beneath the earth).  In any case, that the second heavens inhabit the dividing line between Heaven and Earth is sufficient for now.

I imagine the second heavens to be naturally in a state of chaos, where time and space fold in and back on themselves and where the so-called “laws” of physics mean nothing.  Where God’s Heaven is infinite and eternal, our Earth is finite and bound by laws both in time and dimension.  The second heavens must be neither clearly one nor the other, but that does not mean it is uninhabitable.

In my universe, order can be imposed (to some extent) on the chaos by will and word.  I imagine this realm as the place where the homes of the various gods were located, like Mount Olympus and Aesgard and the top of the rainbow bridge.   I imagine this realm also contained the lands where the spirits of the dead were kept before they were taken up.  Thus you would find Hades, the Elysian Fields as well as the pit of Tartarus here. 

Some say the New Jerusalem is already waiting to descend out of the second heavens.  Others suggest that the endless sea found in the second heavens is the place from which came the water that once flooded the Earth.  Some claim that when we sleep, our spirits travel in the night and carve out little places in the second heavens to give temporary life to our dreams.  And of course, purgatory would fit there very well.  In some traditions, this would be the place of the astral universes.

In my universe, I have placed Avalon and the innumerable isles in the second heavens.  Avalon, the island by that name, the one found in Arthurian lore, the Isle of the apples is there.  Indeed, Gulliver never explored so many a variety of islands.  Imagine dragon isle or centaur or mermaid isle or the isle of the beautiful women as found in Celtic lore.  Some of the islands are mentioned in myths and legends from all over the earth.  Some have been altered in print to protect the innocent.  Imagine the isle of the lost luggage which collects everything we lose – like one sock or one earring, and the luggage, to be sure.

Avalon itself (and the castle) was designed as a safe haven and a place where the little spirits of the earth could rest from their labors.  Those spirits would include the sprites of fire, air, and water as well as the more familiar sprites of the earth such as light elves (including fairies), dark elves (including goblins and trolls) and the dwarfs in between. 

At the sub-place where this dividing line between Heaven and Earth touches the earth, there is hyperspace or sub-space where people can enter a place just outside of the limits of this bound universe and travel faster than the speed of light.  Of course, if one could travel from up there, further up and further in as C. S. Lewis once described it, there is no telling what might be found amidst the natural chaos.  Thus the stories…

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: The Wounded Wolv

            The thing came first to the front door.  They heard the growl, but at least this time the children kept quiet.  They heard it scratch along the side of the house toward the kitchen door and heard a different, whining sound when it caught a whiff of the gas. 

            There was a stone wall on that side of the house that lined the driveway, and between the stone wall and the wall of the house there was a great stack of cut wood for the fireplace.  Glen knew the Wolv could not break through that wall without moving all the lumber first.  He felt safe in that direction until he heard the Wolv use the lumber to get up on the roof.

            “The chimney.”  The boy said before his mother quieted him.  Glen knew the chimney was much too small.

            They listened to the click, click of the Wolv claws across the roof and Glen chided himself for his oversight.  If the beast broke into the upper floor, there was nothing to prevent it coming through the ceiling at any point.  He breathed again when he heard the Wolv jump down on the other side of the house.

            There was a terrific crash and the wall buckled on that side of the house, but it did not break.  Then there was silence.

            “Is it gone?”  Mrs. Calveri dared to hope.

            “Did it hurt itself?”  Mister Calveri was also hopeful.

            Glen shook his head, though they could not see well since the lights in the sitting room were off and only a flashlight was burning behind the couch for the children.  “With their size and strength the Wolv can break through any wooden stockade, no matter how well built.  Stone, or bricks can be a bit of a problem, but they have explosives for that.”

            “Explosives?”  Miss Watson sounded surprised.  “I thought they did not understand such things.”

            “They understand explosives.  They know all about electricity, too.  It could smell the ozone which is why it did not try to break through the doors or come down the stairs.  They understand weapons and even how to fly spaceships as long as the navigation is mostly computerized.  It is sophisticated electronics they don’t understand, like how to short out a personal screen, or how to repair it once destroyed.”

            The young girl screamed.  She had been sticking her head above the couch.  The Wolv face was in the front picture window, lit up by the few red and green Christmas lights they left in the string.  It began to growl and drool and turned its head so like a bird it could watch them with one big yellow and red eye.

            “No!”  Glen pushed up Mister Calveri’s shotgun and the slug went into the ceiling.  “You shatter the glass and it will get in.  Now, reload.  The Wolv won’t risk the glass.  The screen it wears can deflect bullets, but glass shards would cut it up despite the screen.”

            Mister Calveri nodded and tried to reload with his shaky hands.

            There was a second crash against that same spot in the side wall and this time the wall collapsed.  Everyone screamed except Glen, and Miss Watson who got on her belly and brushed the plaster and wallboard off the copper plate.

            The Wolv did not show its face at first.  No doubt it wanted to be sure there were no sophisticated weapons.  When no shot came through the hole in the wall, it stuck its head around the corner.  Then it stepped into the room, stepped squarely on to the copper plate in that corner and Glen turned the knob on the transformer to full blast. 

            The beast roared and howled and shook like jelly as the electricity coursed through its body.  It appeared glued to the plate for the moment and Glen kept yelling “Shoot!  Fire!”  Poor Mister Calveri was frozen in absolute fear and panic.  “Shoot, damn it!  Fire that gun!”

            Glen had to keep the transformer knob turned, but he managed to wedge the thing with his knee and use his left hand on the knob.  That left his right hand free to scramble across the small of his back in search of his long knife—which did not want to cooperate.  He was just about to trade places through time with Diogenes when he heard, Bang!  Bang!  The shotgun fired both barrels in quick succession.  Miss Watson had grabbed it out of the man’s hands.

            One bullet hit the Wolv in the belly and the second hit the shoulder as the recoil caused the gun to rise up.  It also pushed the creature free of the metal plate where the beast let out a great, mournful howl.  It bounded back out into the dark and left a wet trail of purplish-red blood all across the carpet and splattered on the walls.

            Mrs. Calveri and the children were behind the couch, sobbing.  Mister Calveri came out of his shock enough to drop his face into his hands and sob as well.  Apparently his bowels had let loose.  Glen grabbed Miss Watson by the hand and dragged her to the hole.  He noted where the beast had torn through a bush in its escape so he felt it was safe for the moment to step out on the grass.  There he went away and Valencia came to stand in his place.

            “This is not good.”  Valencia spoke right up.  “A wounded beast is always more dangerous.”  She turned to Miss Watson.  “Debbie.  You must call Newton and let the police know there is a wounded wolf on the prowl and it would be best to get everyone off the streets until it is subdued.  Then you must call my friends and tell them what happened.  Do you remember the number?”  Miss Watson nodded.  “Then if it circles back, you must try to kill it if you can.  The screen is shorted out now so the shotgun should do the job.”

            “But where will you be?”

            “I have to track it and try to finish the job myself.”

            “Of course, you can fly.”

            Valencia shook her head exactly like Glen.  “I have been able to fly in several lifetimes.  No, I think Glen thought of me earlier because I have another virtue.  It was subconscious, if that is the right word.  I have a rather big subconscious.”

            “A virtue?”

            “Yes.  Saturn gave me the gift of flight so I could escape the men who wanted to rape me, but when I got away from my brother and his friends Saturn gave me a more permanent solution.”  Valencia turned toward the broken bush and took in a deep whiff of air.  “He gave me the were of the wolf.  Not like in the movies, but like the Were People, the shape shifters of old.”  Valencia turned back to face the woman.  “I was the wolf who suckled the two orphan boys Saturn brought me just before the founding of Rome.  You might read about me in the history books, though I guess it has become no more than a myth these days.”

            With that Valencia smiled and fell to her knees.  “If I don’t see you again, don’t look for me.”  She spoke as her armor vanished and she very quickly changed from a woman to a wolf.  She was bigger than any normal sized wolf, too, though not nearly as big as the Wolv.  With a wag of her tail and her nose to the ground she bounded through that same broken bush.

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Wolv at the Door

            After some twenty minutes of winding through trees, they came out in farm country and Glen turned into the long driveway of the first house where he saw some lights.  He screeched to a halt and made Miss Watson get out.  “Come on,” he said.  “We have to let people know what is happening.”

            “You’re mad,” she said.  “I wouldn’t stop between here and the city.”  But as much as she thought he was crazy, she was not about to be left alone outside in the car.  He took the keys.

            Bang, Bang!  Glen knocked and rang the bell until finally a man in his t-shirt and boxers came to the door.  “We need to use your phone.  There’s been a murder at the archeological dig up the road.”

            “Murder?”  They heard the woman’s voice before the face peered around the corner.

            “Please?”  Miss Watson begged and the woman responded.

            “Move.”  The woman punched the man in his fat belly.  He took a step back so the woman could unlock the screen door.  “Phone’s in the kitchen,” she said before they all paused.  There was a howl in the distance.  It was still far away but Glen and Miss Watson had no doubt it was on their trail.

            “What the Hell is that?”  The man asked.

            “Wolv,” Glen responded. 

            “The murderer,” Miss Watson corrected.

            “And on its way here next,”  Glen concluded as they went inside.

            “What the Hell is that thing?”  The man repeated himself while Miss Watson went to the kitchen.  “What the Hell is this all about?”

            “Hell is coming,” Glen said before he turned to shout to Miss Watson.  “You have the number I gave you?”

            “No.”

            He shouted the number and added a few words.  “Tell them the Wolv is loose.  W-O-L-V.”  He spelled it for her.  “They may have something in the database, but tell them they are going to need a bazooka if we can’t stop it.”  He turned to the man.  “What’s your name?”

            “Calveri.”  The man said.  To give him credit, the man was honestly trying to understand what was happening. 

            “Well, Mister Calveri, what is the nearest town of size?”

            “Newton, I suppose.”  Mrs. Calveri was the one who answered.

            “Lunch and dinner.”  Glen said, and Miss Watson returned even as there was a sound on the stairs.

            “Mama?”  The girl was maybe eleven and the boy behind her was perhaps seven.

            “Come here.”  The mother corralled her children even as Glen began to pace.

            “Garlic.  Have you got any garlic Mister Calveri?”

            “Eh?  Calveri.”  The man smiled.  “Werewolf?”  The man asked in all seriousness.  Glen shook his head.

            “Worse,” he said.  “This one is about eight feet tall and almost guaranteed to be wearing a personal shield—a belt or wristband or something.  It isn’t a very good shield but enough to deflect a bullet, lots of bullets.  Got a gun Mister Calveri?”

            “Shotgun,” the man answered.  “It’s in the barn.”

            “Better get it.  And any lime or fertilizer.  As much as you can carry.”

            “Garlic.”  Mrs. Calveri came back from the kitchen with a whole string of natural garlic, and everyone paused again as they heard the howl in the distance.  It was closer than before.

            Mister Calveri ran out the back door toward the barn.  Glen got the women to spread garlic all around the front door frame, the kitchen door, and especially the big picture window while he paced.  Suddenly he stopped pacing and threw his hands to the overhead light.

            “Oh!”  He shouted.  “Electricity!”  He turned to the boy.  “Has your dad got any wire, electrical wire somewhere?”

            “The basement.”  Mrs. Calveri answered for her son.

            “Come on.  Let’s get it.”

            The boy shook his head.  “It’s spooky down there.”

            “I’ll show you,” Mrs. Calveri said and she handed her garlic to her son and told him to spread it everywhere on the window.

            In the basement, Glen found a whole spool of electrical wire, two lamps that were taken apart and he yanked out the electrical cords from them because they had plugs.  He kissed the plugs.  He found two thin copper 4X4 plates.  He had no idea what they were from, but he handed them to Mrs. Calveri to carry.  Then he found something that made him shout.

            “Christmas lights!”  They were the old kind with big bulbs and hot sockets, and they were parallel so when one burnt out the whole string would not shut down.

            “My husband is a bit lazy.  He doesn’t like to change bulbs all the time,” Mrs. Calveri shifted the copper plates in her arms before she spoke again.  “Look, what is this all about, really?”  Her poor house was being ruined.

            Glen was still looking around the workbench and getting frustrated.  “If I told you, you would call me mad and make me stop and get us all killed.”

            “I wouldn’t do that.  I won’t do that,” she insisted.

            Glen whipped around “The creature is an alien, clever, cunning and hungry and it is coming here and probably to every farm around until it finds its way to Newton.”

            Mrs. Calveri let her jaw drop for a second before she scrunched up her face and shook her head.  “That isn’t true.  You’re crazy.”

            “Can I trust you?”

            “What?  Why?”  Mrs. Calveri was clearly skeptical.

            “Because what I am about to show you is top secret.  You are not allowed to scream or yell or anything of the sort, and you are not allowed to talk about it to anyone, ever, do you understand?”

            Mrs. Calveri nodded but said nothing.

            Glen returned the nod and then he called out to the ancient armor of the Kairos.  That armor and weapons escaped the second heavens and replaced Glen’s clothes faster than Mrs. Calveri could blink.  She almost screamed.  Then Glen went one further and left that place altogether.  He let Dimitri fill the armored boots with strict instructions to act more mature this time.  Mrs. Calveri dropped the copper sheets to clatter on the ground and she took a step back.

            “A train set!”  Dimitri shouted as he yanked out the transformer.  “I’ll buy your son a brand new set, I promise,” he said as he took a hammer from the workbench and cracked open the control box.  “I’m sorry for the shock.  I’ll let Glen come back now, but please believe me when I say all of our lives are in terrible danger.”  Having said that, Dimitri did go away again and Glen returned, but he kept the armor and weapons where they were.  The sword and long knife were made by his Little Ones and endowed with the strength of the god Hephaestus himself.  No simple particle screen would stop them, not to say that Glen knew what to do with them, but there were others that did.

            With the spool of wire, the two lamp cords, the Christmas lights and the broken transformer, Glen started back up the stairs.  Mrs. Calveri shut her mouth, scooped up the copper plates and followed.

            “Gum.”  Glen yelled as soon as he got back to the top of the stairs.  “Duct tape.”  That was his other option.  Mrs. Calveri juggled the plates and pulled a roll of masking tape out of a kitchen drawer.

            “I got gum!”  The young boy shouted from the other room and they heard him run up the stairs even as Mrs. Calveri spoke.

            “Will this do?”

            Glen nodded and they went back into the front sitting room even as Mister Calveri returned with a wheelbarrow full of fertilizer and a double barreled shotgun.  He raised an eyebrow at the sight of Glen in his armor, but Mrs. Calveri put him off with her words.

            “I’ll explain later.”

            “Nice outfit.”  Miss Watson noticed.

            “Where do you want the fertilizer?”

            “Here’s the gum.  I got yours, Missy.”  The young boy raced down the stairs.

            “Thanks, creep,” Missy said before they heard the howl, much closer than before.

            Everyone got gum to chew.  Glen took out most of the Christmas bulbs and had Miss Watson cut and strip little bits of electrical wire.  They attached the wire to the hot, open sockets in the Christmas string while Mrs. Calveri taped it across the picture window.

            “If it tries to come in that way it will get tangled and sting worse than a school of jellyfish,” Glen said.

            Meanwhile, Mister Calveri was busy spreading the fertilizer just this side of every door and window in the house.  It made the whole house smell bad, but that was what they wanted.

            Glen reminded Miss Watson.  “It didn’t find you in the outhouse.”  The Calveris did not exactly understand, but Miss Watson did.

            When Mister Calveri put some fertilizer in the fireplace so the smell would waft up the chimney, the young boy spoke up.  “That’s not right.  We need a fire and a big pot of water for when the wolf comes down the chimney.”

            “Sorry,” Glen responded.  “You live in a wood house, not a brick house.”

            The boy swallowed.  “Does that mean we are going to get eaten?  Will the wolf puff our house down?”

            “You won’t get eaten.”  Glen assured the boy.  “You have one thing the pigs did not have.”

            “What’s that?” 

            “You have a mom and dad who will protect you and keep you safe.”

            The Calveris heard that, and it helped a little when in the next minute they heard the howl outside.  Everyone went to the front window.  It was by Glen’s car, sniffing around.  It was hard to tell in the dark, except it looked big and agile and stood up on two feet like a bear.  Whatever doubts the Calveris may have had up to that point vanished with the sight.  When the Wolv roared and turned its head to face the house, everyone backed up and the children screamed. 

            Mama Calveri took the children behind the couch which had been pushed back toward the fireplace.  Mister Calveri took his seat and picked up his shotgun which was loaded with slugs, not buckshot.  Miss Watson, who had a place behind the couch, nevertheless chose to stay close to Glen.  Glen sat on the living room floor and waited.

            He had hot-wired the front door and the kitchen door frames with the lamp wire and gum and tape.  They were plugged in and getting hot.  He had also blown out the pilot light in the oven so the kitchen was slowly filling with gas.  It would be a while before the gas seeped into the living room.  They were safe for the present provided the kitchen door did not get hot enough to set off the gas. 

            One copper plate was shoved up the stairs like a makeshift door.  It was also hot-wired with a long line of electrical wire gummed into a table lamp.  It almost blew out the fuse when Glen first turned it on, but the fuse held.  The other plate was also wired and set in the corner of the room where there were no doors or windows.  That plate was currently not hot as Glen had turned the electric train transformer into a kind of dimmer switch.  Everyone asked why Glen put that plate in the one corner of the room where the creature could not get in.  Glen said nothing.  He just poured water on the plate.

            “Now what do we do?”  Mister Calveri was the one who asked.

            “Nothing,” Glen answered.  “It’s Wolvy’s turn.”

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Wolv in the Night

            Valencia quickly covered the view of the Wolv.  She popped open the full door, but Miss Watson would not stop screaming until her young man came running to hold her.

            “It was terrible, dead and staring.  Cold eyes full of evil.  It was evil.”  Miss Watson tried to explain between sobs of fear.  Valencia escorted the couple out the door, shut down the internal systems and sealed the door behind them.

            “Paper.”  Valencia tried to change the subject. 

            “Up here.”  The young man said and he escorted her to the main tent, but slowly because Miss Watson did not want to be let go.  She settled a little by the time they arrived and contented herself to sit in a chair while Valencia wrote out the phone number.

            “I’ll never be able to sleep.”  Miss Watson said.

            “So come back here tonight and keep me company,” the young man suggested.  “I have no intention of sleeping until these people come and take that thing away, whoever they are.”  It was an awkward but a sincere invitation.

            “I could come back,” Miss Watson said.  She looked at her man with hope.  “Oh, but I would be so close to that thing.”  She pointed.

            “Don’t worry.  The boy said two thousand years old.  I am sure after two thousand years it is dead.”

            “But—“

            “Besides.  I’ll stay with you.  Nothing will get you in the night.”

            “You better stay close.”

            “I will.  I promise.”

            “Ahem!”  Valencia had to cough to get their attention.  “Now no talking about this to anyone except these people.  You can talk to these people, but that’s it.  Especially don’t talk about it to Glen.”  She pointed at Miss Watson.  “Now we have to get going to get back to the city anywhere near the right time.”  She handed the phone number to the young man and went away.  Glen came back and immediately took Miss Watson by the hand.  He dragged her at first, but eventually she understood and let go of him.  The rest of the students were already loaded up in the bus, waiting.

            Glen took the seat right behind the driver and sat by the window.  Something was troubling him but he couldn’t name it.  By the time he got back to New York, he had forgotten most of what happened, but something held on and would not quite let go.  He took the A-train back down the West Side, took the Path and train home, but he was still concerned about something.  He went to bed that night with a worried look on his face.  It was not until one in the morning that the pieces came together. 

            “They might sleep for a hundred years or even a thousand years if not picked up.”  He said it himself.  “Or two thousand years.”  He said it out loud and added, “Damn!”  He got up and dressed as quietly as he could so as not to wake the family.  He went downstairs and jumped into the little Triumph convertible.  The top was already down.  The thing could not do better than fifty with a tailwind, but it was the only car he was allowed to drive.  He backed out of the driveway in the dark and turned on his headlights when he reached the street.  He hoped he could remember how to get there, and he said, “Damn, damn,” the whole way.

            Glen pulled up to the dig with his lights off.  What was he doing?  That was when he decided he was insane.  Still, he had come that far.  He had to see.  He turned the car, backed in for a quick getaway and crawled slowly into the dark, going from one bush to another as if the Wolv might not see him.  He knew the Wolv could not only see perfectly in the dark, it could hear him a mile away and smell him at an even greater distance, but being sneaky made him feel better.

            Glen found an arm near the main tent and he almost turned back.  Then he thought about throwing up but swallowed it back down.  There were pieces of people scattered everywhere around the digs.  He almost turned back again, but at last he went up into the tent and he found a survivor.  It was Miss Watson.  Her eyes were wide with madness and her fist was shoved deep into her mouth to prevent herself from screaming.

            “Come on,” Glen whispered.  The woman’s eyes did not move.  “Miss Watson.  It’s Glen.  Come on, we have to go.”  At the mention of his name, Miss Watson looked up but there was no sign in her eyes that she recognized him.  “We have to go.”  Glen spoke with more volume and like he had done the previous afternoon, he grabbed her hand and dragged her out of the tent.

            “No.”  She protested, feebly.  “If we move it may see us.”  But soon, like on the previous afternoon, she came to understand where they were headed and stopped resisting.  Glen could pick up the pace then and the woman had no trouble keeping up.

            Glen jumped into the driver’s seat as soon as they reached the car.  Miss Watson crawled up the trunk and fell into the back seat.  Glen started the engine but over top of the whine of that little four cylinder, they heard the howl.  It was close, and Glen left in as much of a cloud of dust and gravel that little Triumph could produce without stalling. 

            “I see it!”  Miss Watson screamed.  Glen checked his rearview mirror an saw it as well.  It looked to be about the size of the car and it was running on all fours and gaining.  After a short way, though, they got to some pavement and Glen revved it up from thirty-five to as near fifty as he felt was safe.  The Wolv could go across country, but Glen knew that on foot even the Wolv could not catch them at that speed.  Unfortunately, he also knew the Wolv could track them no matter how fast they went, and it would not give up no matter how long it took.

            “What is that thing?”  Miss Watson asked suddenly.  Glen glanced at her as she crawled over the seat and into the front bucket.  He imagined she must have blotted out the trauma of the dig for the moment.

            “Wolv.”  He answered as well as he could and concentrate on the road.

            “Wolf.  I can see that.”

            “No, Wolv.”  Glen shook off the correction and decided to go in a different direction.  “An alien.  Not smart.  Not sophisticated in engineering.  Probably could not fix the escape pod, but not stupid.  Clever and cunning.  The Humanoid Empire used them as front line troops in battle, and they rarely had to send in the second line.  They are warriors, hunters and absolute killers—predators.”

            “Wolv.”  Miss Watson tried to word.

            “So how did you, you know, survive?”  He asked and the woman looked at him at first as if she did not understand what he was asking, but then she did and she looked away.

            “I was in the outhouse.  I heard the screams.  I did not dare come out.”

            “All that shit probably disguised your scent.”

            “I heard it sniffing around the outside and I almost screamed myself.  But then it went away.  I waited a full hour.  When I came out, I saw…”  The woman began to cry and Glen hardly knew what to say.

            “We’ll get through this,” he said at last.  “We will survive this.”

Reader Quest: My Universe: Alternate Worlds, type III

Somewhere in the course of my writing, it occurred to me that I was drawing on a lot of archetypes, a large number of Platonic Ideals: dragons, fairies, deities in all shapes and sizes, and whole kingdoms like El Dorado and Nirvana and fountains of youth, and more.    I imagined they ought to fit somewhere in creation but I could not quite place them. 

It was too much of a stretch to place them in some deep and mythical past like Robert E. Howard (Conan the Barbarian) or J. R. R. Tolkien (Lord of the Rings) might have imagined because there was simply no evidence for that.  Besides, these “things” were too otherworldly for such a concept to hold up on close examination.

It did not make sense to place them in what I am calling “Spatial” universes such as conceived by current scientific theory.  These universes are not imagined to contain variable life forms, but rather to stretch, even negate the so-called laws of physics to the point of absurdity.  One would not have to travel far into the spatial dimensions to find a universe completely inhospitable to any form of life.  I have already stretched that concept to include the “Other Earth” as a place filled with the variable and creative energy (magic) missing in our dimension.  Going further out decreased rather than increased the odds of finding unicorns.

Then also, it did not make sense to place them in what I call the “Temporal” universes.  These are the universes imagined in most science fiction, where something of significance is altered in the past and the whole subsequent course of history plays out differently.  My principal characters in the novel Guardian Angel that explore this concept refer to these universes as the worlds, though they have also been called parallel earths or alternate realities.  Still, it is far too difficult to imagine a real history so altered as to produce goblins and a Benu Bird (Phoenix) able to be reborn from its own ashes.

So here I was stuck with all of these archetypes – things universally understood throughout the history of human consciousness, and nowhere to put them.  The thing that always seemed remarkable to me was how consistently so much of this was known across time and even across cultures.  Surely, there must be some reality behind these things…

So I have imagined a third set of alternate realities, not spatial nor temporal, but spiritual (mythological or folkloric if you prefer).  These are the universes of our dreams and the place of our imaginations.  These are the universes that gave rise to the very universal concepts we all know.  I find it comforting in a way to feel instead of the entire human race suffering from some form of mass psychosis, there is a reality we can touch in our dreams, our visions, our hearts, and certainly also in our fears though I would rather not go to the last.  But the Caller, my protagonist in the novel Killers in Eden might.

It was sometime after settling my mind on this idea that I wondered what the second heavens might be like…but that will have to wait for a future post.

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: The Face of the Wolv

            It was a few minutes before the lights came on in the ship and Glen’s voice echoed up from below.  “Miss Watson and the young man can come down.  Grumpy too if he promises not to yell anymore.  Be careful where you put your feet, though.  This whole thing is tipped on its side.”  Glen was glad all they could really step on was visuals, scanner arrays and the opposite door, not weapons or engine works which were on two of the walls.

            The young man came first.  Miss Watson followed with a word.  “The Professor said he can wait until it gets uncovered.”  Glen nodded as the young man stopped, stared and asked what was on his mind.

            “What happened to that other man?”

            “He went home for the present,” Glen said.

            “Oh?”

            “Yeah, roughly fourteen hundred years or so in the future.”  Both Miss Watson and the young man looked at Glen like maybe he was lying, but Glen ignored the reaction.  He took a hand from each and spoke of three things.

            “First, I am going to need you to tell the professor to get everyone back at least a hundred yards from this site.  Think football field.  Second, I never should have changed like that in front of everyone.  That is top secret and so is what you are about to see.  I will give you a phone number you can call and have this ship picked up, but first you must promise you will never speak of this to anyone, especially me.”

            “You?”  Miss Watson could not help the interjection.

            Glen nodded.  “Normally I don’t remember this stuff, like I am sleepwalking through life or something.  If you talk about it with me when I’m just normally walking around that might be like waking a sleepwalker.  That can be very dangerous, you know.”

            “And the third?”  The young man asked.

            “Promise you won’t let go.  It’s tradition.” 

            “Huh?  Sure.”

            Glen did not wait.  He vanished and a woman took his place.  She was dressed in a kind of dress that could only be described as Roman.  Miss Watson shrieked and let go.  The young man gulped but held on.

            “I better go back up and see the Professor gets everyone away from this thing,” the man said with only a little shakiness in his voice.

.            ”Good idea.”  The woman encouraged him.  “I was born around 761 BC.  No telling if I can fly this thing.”

            The man merely nodded and swallowed some more while he climbed back up the rope.

            “My name is Valencia by the way, like the orange.”  Valencia rolled her eyes at having to say that every time, but she stuck out her hand to shake with Miss Watson.

            “Debbie Watson.”  The woman put her hand out, but with some obvious reluctance.  Valencia grabbed the wrist and shook it vigorously.

            “I know who you are.  Just as well your man left it to us women, don’t you think?”

            “Oh, no.”  Miss Watson shook her head, shyly, but a little smile crept into the corners of her lips.  “He is not my man.”

            “He should be.”

            “Us women?”

            “What do I look like to you?  I know I can come across as butch sometimes but really!”

            “Oh, no.  I get it.  I just thought Glen, you, you know, he—“

            “I was born in 761 BC.  Want to know when I died?”

            “No!”  Miss Watson shouted the word.  “I mean, I don’t get it.  Why did Glen pick you?  I assume he picked you somehow.”

            Valencia smiled and took a moment to brush her long red hair straight back.  She had no bangs and no center part, either.  She picked up the rope and finally answered.  “Because I can fly,” she said, and she left the ground.  Miss Watson shut her eyes and began to mumble.

            “No, this is too much.  I can’t take this.  This is too much.”

            Valencia carried the rope up to the hatch and threw it out of the ship.  “Hey you!”  She shouted as the young man was coming back to give them the all clear.  Valencia wagged her finger to call him in close.  The young man came without hesitation.  He ignored the fact that Valencia had to be flying, like his brain simply refused to process that thought.

            “Ask her out,” Valencia said.  “She would really like that.  Now, get that Jeep out of here.”  The man nodded and ran to the jeep while Valencia closed the hatch.

            “I can’t believe you said that!”  Miss Watson came out of her mumbles long enough to yell.

            “What else are girlfriends for?”  Valencia asked and she flew to where she could stand on the actual floor of the ship.  That put her at ninety degrees to the earth.  “Ready to slide to the floor?”  She asked, but she did not wait for an answer.  She touched the necessary controls to cause the center of the ship to rotate within the hull.  It took a second, but as Miss Watson slid to the floor, exactly as prophesied, Valencia found herself standing upright.  “Now, let’s see.”

            Valencia was not sure how to work the rest of it.  There seemed to be some division of opinion in time.  At last she picked the consensus route and the whole ship shook rather vigorously.  It was like an earthquake outside the ship, but they felt little on the inside until the ship broke free of the earth and shot up about three miles into the sky in almost no time.

            “Wee-hee!”  Valencia shouted.

            “My God!”  Miss Watson had a very different reaction.  “Can we get back down?”  She ran to the hatch window and looked out on the clouds.

            “Not yet.”  Valencia said, and she moved them to an upper Earth orbit in about five minutes.

            Miss Watson said nothing at first while Valencia came to stand beside her.  At last Miss Watson shared her feelings.  “It’s beautiful.”

            “It is.”  Valencia said.  “I always wanted to see, but I didn’t dare tell Saturn.”

            “The planet?”  Miss Watson wondered.

            “The god.”  Valencia answered without batting an eye.  “But now I suppose we had better all go home.”  She returned to the controls and within another fifteen minutes, managed a relatively soft landing on the archeological site.

            “One thing I don’t understand.”  Miss Watson had apparently been thinking that whole time.  “If this is a sphere, why is it square inside?”

            “Ah!”  Valencia had already figured that out for herself and was rather proud at having done so.  “The six corner sections are cryogenic chambers.  This is an escape pod.  Normally, it is programmed to fly at near light speed to some destination.  Depending on where that is, though, they might sleep for a hundred years or even a thousand years if they aren’t picked up.  So they sleep until rescue so as not to age in the waiting time.”

            “But by the time they get rescued, everyone they know will be dead.”

            “Not human,” Valencia reminded her.  “Why it crashed to earth, I don’t know.  If there were humanoid survivors, the pod would have been picked up with the humanoids.  You may find some interesting bones on this dig, you know.”

            “You don’t mean—“  Miss Watson paused in thought while Valencia nodded.  “Sleep chambers?  You mean like, what do they call it, suspended animation?”

            “Here, let me show you.”  Valencia uncovered the view of one of the chambers and Miss Watson screamed.  There was a snarling wolf head staring at her, dead eyes open.

Writerly Stuff: How to write a series.

That depends on the kind of series you are writing. 

1.  For over a hundred years, mystery writers in particular have written series based on what some call the continuing character.  Sherlock Holmes remained the same as he went from separate adventure to separate adventure.  Doctor Moriarty showed up in several adventures along the way, so there was a continuing antagonist in the series as well.

Television picked up on this kind of continuing character idea.  Other genres like SF & F have also, particularly recently in the vampire/demon slayer type stories.

2.  Although there are earlier examples (E E “Doc” Smith’s Lensmen series for example), it was really Tolkien’s publisher who coined the phrase “Trilogy.”  That is a different kind of series, where each story/book has some independence and resolution, but where the larger “trouble” remains unresolved until the last book.  Think Star Wars…but now with the likes of Harry Potter, we have gone beyond the mere “Trilogy” concept. 

The bottom line is you need to end your story/book in whatever way you are most comfortable and satisfied, and don’t let anyone tell you it must be this way or that (except maybe your publisher).  Still, I would urge you to consider your readers.  Will they be satisfied with the story while at the same time wanting to read the next one? 

It is a fine line we all have to guess at.  If you see a massive sales drop between book one and book two, my guess is the reader did not get a good read for their money but found book one only a set-up to force them to buy book two, and that can tick people off…  Not a good idea. 

My recommendation, for what it is worth is to foreshadow all you want and leave unresolved whatever grand story might need to continue, but let each book be a book – a story with a beginning, middle and end all unto itself.

Now, how much of book one needs to go into book two – what my grandfather used to call (re: television) “exciting scenes from last week?”  This is also a fine line each writer needs to walk.  It is an art form.  Too much intro., and people wonder why they bothered to read the first book.  Too little, and you will lose any new readers you might otherwise interest. 

At some point, Conan-Doyle had to assume people knew the Holmes character well enough for him to jump right into the story.  Imagine if Spiderman had to review his origin every episode.  On the other hand, imagine reading The Two Towers (Lord of the Rings) with all mention of Sauron, the essence of the ring, Mordor and the impending doom of Middle Earth removed.  There is a lesson there, I think.  It doesn’t have to be all bunched up at the beginning of book two like some 50-100 page prologue…  You can save it for a need to know basis – and then backtrack to find the best place to insert the information…  Just some thoughts.

In fact, next time I may blog on prologues…

Reader Quest: My Universe: Alternate Universes

Exciting Scenes from Last Week: 

On Monday I blogged on the Other Earth (I invite you to click on the tab above and read all about it).  That other earth might best be called a “spatial” world as conceived by Hawkings, which is to say, a completely natural phenomenon.  Since that universe is only one notch (so to speak) from our own, the laws of physics hold true there except for one thing.  There is a strong influx of creative and variable energy there which allows for the manipulation of matter and energy – or to be more pedestrian about it, there is magic on that Other Earth.

This, however, is not what most people think of when they imagine alternate universes. 

Instead, people tend to think and the literature of Science Fiction tends to portray what I call “temporal” universes.  These are earths where, in my view, something significant or several significant events occurred differently at some point in history and thus the whole world turned out different.  In fact, that is what the Gaian people – humans from a very technologically advanced earth call these time created universes: the Worlds.

Let me first say that unless the event is significant, chances are history won’t remember.  Family history might be changed for a time; even national history in some small ways, but eventually the changes will fade or blend into the background and this universe will go on without division.  History paints with a very broad brush.

In order to create a new universe (a new timeline) the change must be historic.  Think of Alexander (the Great) being assassinated with his father and so he never conquers the Persians and never becomes “great.”  Lincoln surviving his assassination attempt, on the other hand, might not be enough by itself to change things since Johnson, his vice-president thrust into the presidency, pretty much followed Lincoln’s outline for reconstruction.  In a couple of thousand years, what will it matter?  Then again, tanks suddenly appearing on the Appian Way and rumbling into Ancient Rome would certainly change things.

In the Gaian universe, by way of comparison, the steam engine was discovered by the Greeks centuries before it was “discovered” in Alexandria.  AND, there were people back then who became aware of the steam discovery and who had some notion of what it might be good for.  As a result, Alexander the Great laid rail lines all the way up the silk road to China…

The thing about these Worlds which is important from a story perspective is first, to acknowledge that our earth is not at the pinnacle of technological advancement.  There are all sorts of earths with a technology we cannot imagine who are already traveling the worlds or just learning to travel among the worlds.  The second point is to realize that not everyone traveling the worlds will have the best interests of others at heart.  In fact, some will be downright dangerous – and some might not even be entirely human…

So, you might ask which is the real (original) timeline?  The only possible answer is they all are.  There is no reason to distinguish any line on that level, to think one is more original than another..  Of course, some do.  The Sorvee, for example, regard themselves as real and everyone else more like intelligent animals needing to be controlled and trained.  The Shinarites imagine people from other worlds as hardly more than shadows of real life.  But thus the stories…

Now, there is another form of “alternate universes” but that will have to wait until the next post.

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At present there are no stories of the Worlds above.  In time, barring any significant historical change, there will be.