On Stories: Journey Plots: Coming of Age.

This last journey plot needs no introduction.  It is the journey from childhood to adulthood, and as the fools say, “been there, done that.”  On the one hand, if you have such a story in mind, you have a ready-made audience.  Everyone can (more or less) relate.  On the other hand, unless you write like Salinger or plan to pen the next To Kill a Mockingbird, you may find it is not so easy to do well or in a fresh way. 

Generally, something will happen that will shake or shatter the child’s comfortable view of the world.  Unless you are planning a series like Little House on the Prairie, it is probably best to stick with one thing.  Other aspects of life will be touched on, like a young girl confirming in her mind that her father is a good man, but only one thing should be troubling, and that should be more than enough.

Then it depends on the character you have drawn because not every child will approach a problem in the same way.  Some will explore and discover—perhaps treating the new information like a mystery to be solved.  Some will stand back and watch, taking in how this new information plays out in the rise or fall of the adults around her.  Some might let the information transform them, like trying on mom or dads grown up clothes—and may find out that the information was not quite the same as they first imagined.  There is not just one way to get from New York to Los Angeles.

In the end, the crisis will be resolved one way or another, and it will be transformative, even if all Dorothy learns is if she ever goes searching for her heart’s desire again, she won’t search any further than her own back yard.  Children will grow up (we hope—I’m still struggling with teenagers).  It needs to show in the resolution.

The Plot

Actually, we have already walked through the basic plot.  There are only a few things to add—things which are essentially true of all journey plots.

First, let the dilemma be presented up front.  The journey cannot begin until staying home is no longer an option.  Grandma dies, or single mom brings her boyfriend into the house, or a burglar breaks into the house and terrorizes the family, or the child learns their father died in Afghanistan—whatever.  There is an issue (issues) and childhood’s safe and secure world is at stake.  That is where the journey begins.  That is where they story begins.

The middle is the struggle to deal with it all.  Explore, discover, step up in strength, fall back in weakness and withdraw, trying on clothes.  The success of the story will depend to a great extent on how well these turns of the mind and heart, like obstacles in the road are portrayed, how well they relate to the end result and how creative, imaginative and well written the obstacle sequences are

The end—the transformation from child to adult, at least in this small way—will mirror all journey plots: success or failure; that is good, bad or sad.  Good will be if the child gains a more realistic view of life and is better able to handle reality on a more adult level.  Bad, if the child rejects the lessons and leaves the reader thinking that this one is going to need some serious counseling (if not drugs) ten years down the line.  Sad, if it ends the way so many of these stories apparently want to end these days: with the child replacing innocence with cynicism.  There are other options, you know.

In any case, start at the start, ditching the background and build-up.  Keep in mind that this is a journey.  Arrive at the destination in a few pages and stop.  Yes, the train slows before the station and the plane taxis to the terminal after landing, but don’t drag it out.  Don’t let the beginning or ending drag.  A journey story is all about the middle—it is all about the journey.

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Pumpkin Seeds 5

            “How they came to be here is less important than why,” the voice said.  An elderly elf came in, followed by the commander of the troop that had picked up Sandra and Glen.  “I am Alderon and this is Commander Peregrine.”

            “The Falcon.”  Glen saluted.  “But let me ask, why are you here?”  Glen spoke quickly, and the old elf raised an eyebrow so Glen continued.  “You have brought an army into the wilderness.  I hope we have not fallen into the midst of a war.”  Sandra suddenly looked concerned.  She had not thought of that.

            “No fear,” Alderon said.  “Wars in our realm are rare events these days.  Rather, we had a report of a demon djin crossing close to the border.  We sought to destroy it, if we could, or at least keep it from our homes.”

            “A ghoul?”  Glen asked.

            Alderon shook his old head.  “Our observers did not see it well enough to classify it, except to say it is one of the lesser djin.”

            “But a terror all the same,” Glen said, thinking out loud and turning toward Sandra.  “They can possess people, and feed off the fear and pain they cause in tormenting their victims.”

            “And how do you know the ways of the djin?”  Macreedy asked.

            “Behavioral Sciences,” Glen answered.  “I have studied my Anthropology and my folklore, unless we humans have it all wrong.”  Glen looked up at Alderon who was smiling, just barely.

            “Essentially right.,” Alderon confirmed.  “But now you must answer a question.  Why have you come here?”

            “My daughter and mother disappeared.”  Sandra spoke quickly.  “We were following their trail and found ourselves here.  I don’t know how.  None of this makes any sense, but now I fear we have lost the trail.”  Sandra felt the surge of emotion rise up inside and a few tears began to fall.  Glen quickly put his arms around her and reassured her.

            “We will find them.  Hush.  It will be alright.”  He stroked her hair, gently, and she quieted.  “We were following the seeds, but I don’t know if we can pick up that trail again without going back and getting tangled up with the ogre.”

            Alderon waved and Commander Peregrine held out his hand.  “Were they pumpkin seeds like this?”  Alderon asked.

            Sandra jumped up and took the elf’s hand, not thinking twice about it.  The hand was full of pumpkin seeds.  “Yes,” she shouted.  “But where did you find them?”

            “In this place,” Commander Peregrine responded.  “My command was charged with following them to see where they lead, and they brought us to you.”

            “So, wait.”  Glen said.  “You’re saying if we followed the pumpkin seed trail from the beginning, it would have brought us to this place?”

            Alderon nodded, and Sandra turned.  “Oh, Glen, we haven’t lost them,” she said and then she just had to fall into Glen’s arms and kiss him smack on the lips, and she kissed his cheek as well before grabbing his arm and turning to sit beside him, and pull herself together.

            At the mention of Glen’s name, Commander Peregrine looked surprised, Macreedy had one eyebrow up, Ellean was too busy watching Sandra and thinking her own thoughts to notice, but Alderon was smiling that almost invisible smile of his.  “But where does the trail go from here?”  Glen asked.

            “Ahh…”  Alderon said as he stepped up behind Macreedy and Ellean.  “There are a small number of seeds heading into the caves of the Cormac.  We have chosen not to explore that way since it leads away from our homes.”

            “The caves of the Cormac?”  Macreedy did not think much of those caves and Ellean looked positively frightened.

            “What’s a Cormac?”  Sandra asked, drawing herself as close to Glen’s side as she could get.

            “An ever hungry troll,” Macreedy said.

            “And the caves are full of goblins as well, no doubt trying not to be eaten,” Commander Peregrine added.

            Alderon simply looked at Glen and would not let go of that smile that touched the mere corners of his lips.  “Somehow, though, I have a good feeling about your chances,” he said.  “And since young Macreedy and young Ellean have agreed to see to your welfare, I know you will do well.”

            “What?”  Macreedy looked up sharply at his elder and tried to stand, but Alderon put a hand on the elf’s shoulder to keep him seated.  Then he clapped his hands and stepped aside while two elf maids came and went, quickly.  The first had two more blankets and the second carried four little packs, provisions for the expected journey.

            “You planned this.”  Macreedy accused as Commander Peregrine set down his handful of pumpkin seeds and followed the maids out the tent door.

            “Yes,” Alderon said, finally letting out a bit more of that smile.  He held up his hand and twisted it like one might twist a dimmer switch, and the light in the glow-balls dimmed to night lights.  “Sleep well,” he said, and left.

            Macreedy was not entirely happy, but Ellean set about immediately showing their companions what they could do with the Fairy Weave blankets, changing the color, size, thickness and texture, and all with a thought. 

            “I don’t know why it is called Fairy Weave, though, since it is made by elves.  These were made by the elves of the grove,” Macreedy said.  Glen just nodded and he got the idea easily enough and made something like an air mattress with covers to sleep on.  Sandra had a little more trouble with hers so Ellean helped; but by then with the thoughts and worries about the caves of Cormac getting in the way, Ellean was the only one smiling.

            “This will be so much fun.”  She said.  “I just know I can learn so much from you.” 

            Sandra stared at the elf maid in disbelief.  “You’re seventy three years old and I’m just twenty-three.  How are you going to learn anything from me?”

            Ellean cocked her head to the side and spoke in all seriousness.  “You have a baby.”  She stole a glance at Macreedy.

            “But I haven’t got a husband,” Sandra said and Ellean looked at her again with eyes that were big and brown and suddenly sad.

            “I’m sorry.”

            “No, actually he was a jerk.  Melissa and I are better off without him.”

            “Well.”  Ellean did not know what to say until she looked over at Glen.  “Glen seems very nice, what do you think?”

            Sandra just looked, and since Macreedy and Glen heard everything in that small tent, they also looked.  Sandra appeared to be more concerned to find out if Glen thought she was nice, and while Glen was not ready to answer that question, he did feel that he ought to say something. 

            “I think we all ought to try and get some sleep,” he said, and he got under his covers and turned his back on them all.  Macreedy finished dousing the glow-balls so only the dying embers from the fire provided any light in the tent.  Even so, it was not long before Glen relaxed.  He felt certain that everyone else in the tent was asleep.  He was a little surprised when Sandra crawled under his covers to curl up beside him.  He was more surprised when the other two spoke.

            “I wish I had thought of that,” Ellean said.

            “Go to sleep,” Macreedy responded.

            Glen had a hard time sleeping at first since it was not easy to keep his hands to himself; but then the something inside of him rose up and he felt he could hold this beauty after all without being overly excited.  He slept well after that.  He could not vouch for the others.

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Couples

            It took several hours to reach a camp where Glen guessed there were perhaps a hundred or more elves all dressed for war.  The sun was going down when Glen and Sandra were escorted to a tent.  They were left alone, but Glen was sure there were guards near enough.

            Sandra sat quietly and hugged her knees which were pulled up to her chin.  She seemed to be in her own little world.  Glen paced and tried to make sense of what was happening.  It was weird, as Sandra said.  It was unreal, impossible, and no human being would ever believe it.  Glen felt stupid, like he was in the midst of something out of a children’s story, or an old wives tale, or a folktale where some anthropologist would point out the underlying meaning but would never believe that it might be real.  Elves and ogres did not really exist, Glen told himself, but here he was and here they were.  He had long since rejected the idea that this might be a dream.  “That would have made this B-movie extra bad.”  He mumbled.  Sandra took Glen’s mumble as an opening to speak.

            “My grandmother.”  She paused and shook her head before starting again.  Glen sat down beside her, not touching, but close enough.  “My grandmother used to talk about her grandmother like she was, I don’t know, weird.  She said her grandmother had the magic.  That’s what she called it.  She said her mother had some, but not like her grandmother, while she could hardly do anything at all.”

            “When was your grandmother born?”  Glen was curious, but he was not sure why he asked that question.  This – whoever it was that seemed to be giving him these thoughts was getting annoying.  Glen probably should have been frightened by the invasion of his mind except there were two mitigating feelings.  The first was that the someone, whoever it was, felt so comfortable.  Glen could not imagine any harm coming from that direction.  The second was there were far more frightening things happening all around him, he hardly had time to worry about what might be trying to help him.

            “1908,” Sandra said.  “She would have been seventy this year if she was still alive.”  Glen nodded.  It was presently 1978.  After a pause, Sandra added the word, “Cancer.”

            “And her grandmother?”

            “I don’t know.”

            “Say, 1870?”

            Sandra shrugged.  “Grandma said her great-grandmother was a half-blood.  I remember asking once half-what?  I got the strangest answer.”  Sandra looked like she did not want to say it, but as an elf chose that moment to enter the tent with a tray of food, Sandra found the courage to verbalize what had always seemed loony.  “Fairy.”  She said.  “My great- great, whatever-grandmother was a half-fairy.”

            Glen nodded.  “1849 gold rush,” he said as the elf put down the food and turned to leave.  “Wait a minute.”  Glen spoke up, and the elf paused.  “What are you going to do with us?”

            The elf turned and shrugged.  He was skinny, terminally skinny the way certain elves were, and his ears were very pronounced and pointed, but they matched his pointed nose.  “Nothing that I know of.”  At least his voice sounded normal. 

            The elf decided to sit and as he crossed his long legs he leaned forward to place a hand over the fire.  It rose up with new life.  Given the circumstances, neither Sandra nor Glen were surprised by that bit of magic. Sandra scooted a bit closer to the fire for the warmth.  Glen decided to to look around. 

            The fire was in the middle of the tent floor and there was a small hole in the tent roof straight above it.  Curiously, the smoke from the fire went straight up and out the hole without the least bit of it filtering into the rest of the tent.  Neat trick, Glen thought.  He noticed that most of the light in the tent did not come from the fire, but from several globes near the tent roof.  Glow-balls, he called them, and he imagined they were like fairy lights.  Of course, they were not plugged into anything and they were not battery run so he was at a loss as to what powered them, but they glowed just fine and the light was warm and comfortable.  Their night in that tent did not look frightening, but then it did not look all that comfortable if they chose to sleep.  There were only two blankets rolled up on the dirt floor, but Glen did not get to examine them closely because by then Sandra found the courage to ask a question.

            “Do you have a name?”

            “Macreedy, son of Macreedy, son of Macreedy, son of Macreedy.”  The elf said.  “My sire had many daughters, but only one son of Macreedy.”  He smiled and cocked his head back to look toward the tent door and said, “You might as well come in, too.  These people do not appear dangerous and I don’t believe they rub off.”

            A young female head poked in through the tent door.  Her face looked more human, being not nearly so skinny, but the ears were still a giveaway.  The face looked unsure, though, so Glen felt obliged to speak up.

            “No human cooties, I promise,” he said.

            “Well.”  The elf came in slowly to take a seat beside Macreedy.  “As long as you promise.”

            “My name is Sandra,” Sandra said.  “Daughter of Mona, daughter of Edna, daughter of another woman and another and another who was a daughter of a full blood fairy.”

            “Really?”  The elf maid found her smile as Sandra nodded and the maid turned to Macreedy.  “That may explain how they came to be here,” she said, but Macreedy was shaking his head.

            “Let me see if I can say this the way Master Olerian of the Bean taught the lesson.”  He coughed, lowered his voice and affected a very formal tone and look.  “The magic is generally well faded by the third generation, and the blood indiscernible by the seventh, though the child is not considered fully human again until the tenth generation.”  The elf maid giggled, and Glen decided that this elf was in truth a simple girl who might have passed for a seventeen- year-old human, if that.

            “I’m the seventh generation and Melissa is the eighth,” Sandra said, looking mostly at Glen in case she counted wrong.

            “You have a baby?”  The elf girl looked surprised.  Macreedy was still shaking his head as if to say that would not explain how they came to be there.

            “Ellean.”  Glen interrupted and got the elf girl’s attention.  He called the girl by name because his inner voice said that was the elf maiden’s name, not because she had given her name.  “Just to be clear, how old are you?”  Ellean lost her smile and looked like she was embarrassed by the question.  Macreedy spoke for them both.

            “I will be one hundred and ten this year,” he said proudly.  “Ellean is seventy-three.”

            “Only,” Ellean said and she looked down at the fire.

            Sandra felt the shame and reached out to the girl.  “Women mature faster,” she said.

            Ellean did not take Sandra’s hand, but she did look up and smile briefly.

            “That’s years,” Glen said, and Sandra looked at him in surprise.  She was thinking it was something like maybe a lunar calendar, with Macreedy looking about nineteen or twenty and Ellean appearing to be sixteen or so.  “Standard counting is roughly between five and seven to one, like dog years except we are the dogs.”  Glen concluded, and he pulled himself a bit closer to the fire.  After a moment, Sandra also scooted closer in order to close the circle.

            “Old Lord Inaros is reported to be fifteen hundred years old,” Macreedy said.  “But that is extremely rare, even among elf-kind.”  He smiled for Sandra, but Sandra was not paying attention.  Ellean was staring at her.

            “What?”

            “I was wondering if your real name is Cassandra,” Ellean said.

            “Her hair is too blond.”  Macreedy interrupted and shook his head.

            “There are dyes.”  Ellean came back, but this time Sandra shook her head.

            “Just Sandra,” she said.  “Why?”

            The elves paused to look at each other before Macreedy spoke.  “Our goddess was once named Cassandra,” he said.  “It is not to be spoken of with humans, but I can say this much, that we have many gods and goddesses, but they are all one.”

            “I thought maybe…”  Ellean began to speak, but Macreedy took her hand to quiet her.

            “So we still do not know how you came to be here,” Macreedy said.  “Even if Miss Sandra managed the passage by some virtue remaining in her blood, it does not explain the presence of this man.”

            Glen reached for Sandra’s hand and she readily gave it, and her smile, too.  “We are thinking of doing a lot of things together,” he said, and Sandra’s smile broadened.  “How about you two?”

            Macreedy shifted in his seat and looked a little uncomfortable as he glanced at Ellean and dropped the girl’s hand.  Ellean had no trouble matching Sandra’s smile.  “We have talked,” she told Sandra and she held out her hand again, but Macreedy did not take it

            “But about how you got here,” Macreedy spoke hastily to try and get back on the topic, but he was interrupted by a new voice from the door.

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Over there

            “I missed the last ones, but I got you.”  A booming deep, and unearthly voice spoke over Glen’s shoulder.  It was the kind of voice that gave him chills, and the kind that even penetrated Sandra’s screams. Glen got to his feet, dragging Sandra to her feet with him and backed the two of them away from that voice.  The creature stood nearly nine feet tall and was so horrible to look at, Glen’s stomach nearly let go and Sandra could not stop screaming.  Glen had to turn Sandra’s face into his shoulder where she did not have to look at the thing to get her quiet.  This brute, and the word ogre came to Glen’s mind, was covered in warts that sprouted little hairs that looked more like cactus spikes than hairs.  He had several boils on the surface of his skin, if it could be called skin, and a few of those were burst and leaking a pink and yellow puss.  It had a mouth so full of yellow teeth that Glen could not see the back of that maw or count the teeth if he wanted to, not the least because of the green drool that was leaking out over the edge of the lower lip.  It also had a small spark in the eyes that glared at them as if to say that this creature was alive and aware; but to be sure, it was a very small spark.

            “I am going to have you for an afternoon snack,” the ogre roared, and he hefted a club the size of a small tree.

            Glen heard the words “don’t panic” in his mind as his mouth sprang into action, though he was hardly aware of what he was saying.  “Well, if you are going to have us for tea, make sure there are plenty of biscuits, and by all means keep the kippers to yourself.  Those things are almost as slimy and disgusting as you.  Gods you are an ugly beastie.”

            The ogre paused and lifted his head.  “Do you think so?”  He spoke with some doubt in his voice.

            “Oh, yes,” Glen assured him.  “Very ugly.  Frighteningly ugly.  You heard the woman screaming, didn’t you?  Now, let’s get on to tea, you lead the way.”

            “Huh?”  The ogre paused and Glen’s words caught up with his little brain and he guffawed.  “Have you for a snack.”  He guffawed again, and believe me, that is a sound you never want to hear.  Glen had to swallow the bile to keep it from coming out and Sandra had to bite her lower lip, hard, to keep the screams at bay.  “Say, now.”  The ogre stopped laughing and a terrifying looked crossed his face.  “Hold still.”  And he lifted the club.

            Glen’s eyes got wide, but he was looking a little to the ogre’s left side, and he pointed dramatically in that direction and yelled, “Look!”  The ogre turned to look.

            “What?”  He wondered, but by the time he turned again, Glen had grabbed Sandra’s hand and they were running as fast as they could down the path.  “Hey!”  They heard that yell behind them and then heard the tromp, tromp of giant footsteps, following.  Glen wanted to say run faster, but he was fairly sure they could not run faster.  Sandra did not want to say anything.  She was focusing too hard on her feet.  With all that, it sounded like the ogre was gaining on them, but shortly they ran into something, or I should say another thing they hardly expected.  It was a wall of men, all dressed in dark armor, looking like ancient soldiers, and they all had spears pointed in their direction.  Glen was prepared to stop, but at the last minute the men made an opening in the wall and Glen and Sandra raced through.  The opening quickly closed.  Glen heard the twang of bow strings, and while Sandra collapsed to the ground, he found enough strength left to jump up and holler.  “Don’t hurt him.”

            A second volley of arrows came, the ogre having stopped on the first volley.  Most of the arrows landed in front of the ogre as a warning for him to turn around and go back where he came from, but one of the arrows went straight into the ogre’s shoulder.  The ogre looked more surprised than anything else, and while the arrow did not penetrate deeply, when it fell to the ground some blood followed it.  Glen knew someone was not following orders.  This time he really shouted.  “I said don’t hurt him!” 

            The archers were off to the sides of the wall of spears, hidden in trees and behind rocks.  As Glen shouted, he heard a man moan and someone, or something sounded like it fell to the ground.  Glen could not be concerned about that just then.  Instead, all of his concern was on the ogre who he now felt was like a poor child in need of protecting, as odd as that might have sounded.  If he had thought about it, it should have been strange to think that way about a brute that was trying to eat him, but Glen was not thinking at the moment.  He was too busy pressing up to the back of the wall of spears and speaking to the horrifying beast.  “Prickles, go home,” he said.  “Go home, Prickles.  You need to go home right now.”  He told himself that he did not want to see anyone get hurt, and it was not hard to convince himself of that.

            “Go home?”  Prickles the ogre was trying to figure out what he was hearing.

            “Go home.”  A man stepped up beside Glen, and while Glen did not look at the man, he figured it was probably the commander of this troop of soldiers.

            “Go home, Prickles,” Glen repeated, and the ogre nodded.

            “Go home,” the ogre said.  “Go home.”  He turned and walked back the way he came, his long legs taking him quickly out of view.

            Then Glen breathed for all of a second before two of the spear carrying men grabbed him by the arms.  “Bring them.”  The man who had been standing beside Glen commanded, and they moved to where Sandra was also being held against her will.  Glen and Sandra were directed as to where they were to fall in line.

            “This is getting too weird.”  Sandra finally got a word out.  She pointed at the men’s faces and Glen realized, for the first time, that all of the ears were classically pointed and these were not men at all.

            “Elves,” Glen named them and Sandra shrugged as if to say that she was adjusting, that she was not surprised and that maybe she would never be surprised again.

            “And the beast?”

            “Ogre,” Glen said, but then they had to concentrate on walking because they were moving up into the hills.

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Pumpkin, Gone Missing

            Glen left his Anthropology seminar at two-fifty.  He ran to his dorm and tossed his books in the room by two-fifty-five and ran the rest of the way to Haddon House.  Though he was breathing hard when he arrived, the excitement and adrenaline that was rising up inside of him made it more than worthwhile.  After five minutes, he calmed and thought that maybe she was not as excited to be with him as he imagined.  At ten minutes he thought she may have run into some Friday traffic, so he sat on the steps where he could watch the parking lot and the woods.  It was not much longer before his curiosity and trust began to turn.  He began to doubt.  He wondered if she was coming at all.  He began to think that perhaps she did not have feelings for him  – that perhaps he was just projecting his feelings on her.  It was not much longer before he was wondering if he should go look for her. 

            Sandra arrived moments later.  She squealed her tires and stopped without pulling fully into a space.  She ran out of her car without even turning it off. 

            “Glen.”  She cried out and she did not hesitate to run straight into his arms.  “She is gone.  They are both gone, Melissa and my mother.”

            “What?”  Glen got that much out.

            “I dropped Mother in the main lot and she put Melissa in the stroller while I found a safe place to park.  She was going to walk Melissa across the campus to the fork on the path in the woods.  I followed behind, but not too close so people would not see, you know.”  She paused, but Glen reassured her with a nod.  “I was going to get you and when we caught up with them, Mother was going to have errands to run, you know.”  Glen hugged her and patted her back, but Sandra pulled away and looked into his face as if to gauge his reactions.  There were tears in her eyes, and Glen saw that along with the upset, she was also very afraid.

            “It’s alright.  They must be somewhere.”  Glen tried to sound confident.

            “No.  You don’t understand.  They disappeared.  I saw it.  I was behind, and I saw it.  They were there, a hundred yards ahead of me on the path and I was just about to come and get you when they just vanished.  Glen, I don’t know what to do.  I looked everywhere.  I even went back to the car in case they went back there, but I am sure they did not.”

            “So they turned a corner or stepped behind a tree?”

            Sandra grabbed Glen by the arms and squeezed, hard.  “No.  They vanished, disappeared, went invisible.  Oh, I know it sounds impossible but you must believe me.”  She was pleading.  “One minute they were in front of me and the next they were gone.”  She began to cry.

            “Sandra.”  Glen pulled her close and let her cry into his shirt.  “We will find them.  They must be somewhere.  Show me where this happened.”  Glen was not sure what he believed, Sandra was so sincere. 

            Sandra backed up and without a word, she grabbed Glen’s hand and ran.  Glen did his best to keep up.  They were both worn out when they arrived, and Glen mumbled something about running more that day than the past six months put together, but Sandra had her adrenaline running faster than her feet at that point and she started right in.

            “They were here, I swear.  I was back at the beginning of the trail there.”  She pointed.  “And they were right here and they vanished.  They just went invisible.  I swear to God.  I swear it.”  Glen examined the ground and saw the faint impression of what might be tire tracks from a stroller.  He got down to look more closely, and ran his finger over the dirt.  He realized that these tracks were dry dirt and imagined that something was pushed through when the dirt was moist or wet and made the tracks, which since dried.  Thus he was just admitting that the tracks could not have been from Melissa’s stroller when he found a little pile of seeds.

            “What are these?”  He asked, holding them up so Sandra could see.

             “Pumpkin seeds!”  Sandra yelled and threw her arms around Glen’s neck and kissed him, but it was ever so brief.  “Where did you find them?”

            Glen pointed.  “And look.  There are a few more.”  They were easy enough to see since the seeds were still on the trail. 

            Sandra ran ahead to pick them up.  “Mother!  Melissa, Mother!”  She called out, but there was no response, so she came back to Glen who was slowly moving down the path, looking for more seeds or some other something that might indicate the way they went.  Sandra was still talking. 

            “Melissa is teething and she has a whole bag of pumpkin seeds.  She likes to chew on them.  Mother, Melissa!” 

            Glen grabbed her hand when he found another seed.  “Don’t run off,” he said.  “You need to help me look.”  He paused and looked up at Sandra while he picked up the seed with his free hand.  “They can’t have gone far, but we need to stick to the right trail.”  Sandra just nodded, trusted absolutely, and Glen swallowed.  He did not want to disappoint her.

            “Melissa has a whole bag of seeds.”  She repeated herself, and they walked slowly forward until Glen caught something out of the corner of his eye.  There was a breakaway trail to the left.  It was not easy to see.  It was badly overgrown and rough looking so only a trained hunter might spot it, but it was a trail all the same.  Glen paused.

            “What?”  Sandra asked.

            Glen paused because he was not a trained hunter, or anything close.  He wondered how he could be so certain about the side trail.  It felt like someone was inside his mind, looking through his eyes and helping, somehow, but then he spied a lone pumpkin seed and felt better until he imagined that the someone inside had directed his eyes to the seed.  Glen shook himself to break free of that feeling.  “Here,” he said, and picked up the seed.  As he handed it to Sandra, he lifted an overhanging tree branch and they stepped underneath and into another place altogether.

            “I don’t feel well,” Sandra said immediately.  “I feel faint.”  And she did, and Glen barely caught her before she hit the dirt.  He was feeling a bit woozy himself, but as he went to one knee to hold up the woman in his arms, and as he looked at her tranquil face, his dizzy feelings soon passed.  He felt like he had been in this place before, but that did not make sense because he could not say when or exactly where in this place he might have been.  In any case, if once upon a time he was in that place, it certainly was not with such a lovely companion. 

            “I have to,” he said to himself.  “I can feel guilty about it later.”  He dipped his head and touched his lips to hers, thinking that one kiss would never be enough.  To his surprise, she kissed him back, and with some fervor, though she never opened her eyes.  When they separated, she was smiling and her eyes popped open to look at him; and she began to scream.

On Stories: Journey Plots: Transformation and Metamorphosis

Last post I talked about life as a journey, and specifically when it moves in an upward or downward direction, and sometimes both.  Life, however, does not always move in a sure and certain path.  Sometimes it moves in strange and unexpected directions, but it never stands still.  That is the key to the transformation plot, recognizing that life does not ever stay the same.  It always changes.

The classic transformation story can be heard every Sunday morning in any American church where testimonies are given.  It is the conversion story.  Sometimes the degradation starts from the beginning, but usually the story starts with a falling away from the faith.  Then, if you listen closely, you will hear the journey, all the failures, the difficulties, the struggles until at last, they find God (or God finds them) and saves them, which is to say puts them on the upward path rather than the downward path.

Now, consider Dorian Gray.  His transformation was deserved, but Scrooge’s was not.  Go figure.  But Dickens’ Christmas Carol is a classic story of the journey of a man through his life that transforms his whole being.  To be sure, the transformation story is about what happens inside a person that changes them in some way irrevocably and forever.

The transformation story is most evident when a physical change accompanies the internal change, but it must be done well to avoid becoming campy or just plain stupid.  Avoiding the obvious stories that come to mind with the word “metamorphosis,” consider Ionesco’s play, Rhinoceros.  Better yet, look at the classics in mythology and in folk tales.

Venus made the statue come to life.  George Bernard Shaw thought that was a good idea for a play, Pygmalion.  Everyone knows the musical version: My Fair lady, or they should.  And folktales abound with metamorphoses.  There is the Frog Prince, Beauty and the Beast, and one that illustrates the transformation plot very well: Pinocchio.

The Plot

As with any journey, the plot must begin fast.  We are delighted in the end when Scrooge is reformed, but we know from page one that this guy is headed for either Heaven or Hell.  Most often, the transformation occurs at the end as in “the lesson learned.”  Occasionally, though, the transformation can happen right up front and the story can follow the adjustments necessary to deal with this change in reality—as in the Grapes of Wrath. 

In Pinocchio’s case, there is a partial transformation in the very beginning when in answer to a lonely old man’s prayer, a puppet comes to life.  Then comes the middle of the story where the lesson or lessons must be learned to achieve a good outcome to it all.

As with the Rise and Fall stories, the transformation story usually hinges on some virtue or some vice.  If you are a connoisseur of Medieval romances, you understand the phrase “love conquers all.”  Love is certainly the most well-worn trigger to a transformation, but it is hardly the only one.  There are many virtues, and vices (temptations) can also trigger a change—for better or worse.  (Weddings make great transformational stories).

The middle, then, is the struggle either to cope with the new set of circumstances, with obstacles, temptations to turn back, or it is other events that slow progress or seek to sidetrack the outcome, or it is the struggle to attain the hoped for outcome.  Pinocchio has to learn certain lessons such as loyalty, fidelity, about love and about family before he can become a real boy.

The ending, the arrival, also need not be drawn out.  Success or failure.  That is the key to journey plots.  And Transformation plots are like any other: they are not always successful as the Little Mermaid (Anderson’s version) will tell you.

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Pumpkin Seeds

            Sandra was twenty-three and a senior at the University.  Glen did not know what she was majoring in, but at twenty-four, that was not what he was interested in.  Sandra was a slim, buxom blond, and Glen was achingly attracted to her.  At the same time, she was showing a decided interest in him; and she was showing it in every way she could think to show it in order to be certain that Glen got the message even if he turned deaf, dumb and blind.  Yet for all of the sexual tension between them; for all of the hormones that filled the air like great clouds, and despite the ache in Glen’s bones whenever she was in the room, and the desire for him that Sandra breathed out every time she was near him, Glen remained a Gentleman, calm and collected, and Sandra remained a Lady, sweet and demure. 

            It was true, an infant could have seen the blood boiling just below the surface.  They weren’t fooling anyone; least of all themselves.  And it was also true that while Glen might have wanted to say, “Come here, babe,” and he certainly wanted to press himself up against her to feel her rapidly beating heart, and he wanted to slip his arms around her and feel her arms around him and hear the shortness of her sweet breath as her luscious, thick lips said yes, o yes, and then he wanted to kiss her without mercy; but he did not.  He could not.  There was something standing between them, and it was something Glen could not name. 

            So they remained apart, at two separate desks in the school newspaper office, and each wondered why the whole room did not just explode.   Glen thought briefly about cursing that something unnamed that was standing between them, but he did not.  He knew curses always carried consequences.  Curses were always more than mere words.

            “Damn.”  Glen could say that much.  He was staring at the electric typewriter and the blank page in front of him.

            “What?”  Sandra asked, but Glen did not answer, so after a short time of staring at him and thinking thoughts that she imagined Glen could not guess, Sandra went back to her textbook, and Glen got up and walked to the window.

            Glen was only a junior in school, having wandered through three other schools, with plenty of time off before ending up at the University which was a small but very good school in New Jersey, not far from his home.  If not for his own history, he might have questioned why Sandra was older than most of her classmates, but he did not.  Instead, he remembered Diana, the young woman he dated a bit more than a year earlier. 

            He remembered how she betrayed him – how he came home one day and found her in bed with his roommate.  He understood that it was not really her fault.  He remembered that it was not his fault either, though he could not exactly remember why; but she betrayed him all the same.  He had been alone for a long time since then, but now Sandra seemed to be so willing.

             Glen tried telling himself that his reluctance to get close to her was because he was afraid of being betrayed again, but that was not true.  He was healed enough to where he was beginning to feel desperate to get close to someone again.  He tried telling himself that his reservations with Sandra were because he did not really know this girl, this lovely young woman, or much of anything about her; but to be honest, young men in their early twenties rarely think about a woman as a person until later; and especially when the attraction is so strong and so mutual; and, just to be fair, most women know this and dress and act accordingly.

            “I think I just need to go back to my room and get some sleep,” Glen said.  “I really am too exhausted to get any work done.”  That was true enough.

            “I could drive you,” Sandra offered, though she was not sure exactly which dorm he lived in.  She was living in town, at home for some reason.  Glen wondered if maybe she could not afford to live on campus.  “I’m late getting home myself,” she said as put her books away and was ready in no time.  She only took a second to straighten her sweater and run her fingers through her long, curly blond hair. 

            Glen just had to watch, especially knowing that she wanted him to watch.  He loved that white knit sweater.  It made a perfect V shape that hid little and suggested everything, and he felt sure she was wearing nothing of significance beneath the knit.

            Glen tore his eyes away and got his own things.  “It is hardly a walk to the dorm.”  It was a small school so the whole campus was within easy walking distance.  Glen pointed this out, but the protest was so feeble they both ignored him, and Glen thought how glad he was that he had a single room. 

            With that thought making all kinds of suggestions echo through his mind, Glen turned off the light and held the newspaper office door so Sandra could go out first.  She obliged, ignored the fact that there was plenty of room,  and brushed by him, or rather up against him, touching in several places as she passed.  Glen did not even check to see if the door locked behind them.

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            Once in the car, with the windows up and only the light of the distant dormitory buildings and the stars overhead to shine down on them and bring a glow to their faces, Sandra and Glen began to talk.  It was not about much, at first.  It was mostly just talk, like empty words about some of their past experiences, their interests and such.  Sandra asked if he was seeing anyone, and Glen felt every ounce of hope in that question.  Glen started into his routine answer about Diana, not that she betrayed him, but that they broke up when he transferred from the State College to the University; but then he thought he had better be more honest.

            “It was a strange relationship from the beginning.  I found out that she had been abused as a child, and when we met, she left a guy who was abusing her again.  I kind of went overboard to make sure I was a gentleman the whole time, but I guess it is true that nice guys finish last.  She could not handle being with a nice guy, so after about a year she ended up in bed with someone who slapped her around.”  Glen shrugged.  He could never understand why some women can’t feel love unless they are with jerks who treat them like dirt, and of course, that isn’t love, it is only a kind of masochism.  “Well, anyway, that is past history.  So how about you?”

            Sandra turned away from Glen and Glen was surprised but certain that there was a tear or two.  Clearly it was something she did not want him to see.  He had the good sense to wait, patiently, though he did slip his arm around her shoulders to offer his comfort.  He could not help that.

            “Most men don’t want a used woman,” Sandra said at last.  She turned again to look into his eyes with such hope and longing it staggered Glen.

            “Don’t be so sure, there are all kinds of men in the world,” Glen said.  “Anyway, this is 1978 and aren’t you liberated or something?”  As was normal for him, Glen was trying to lighten the intensity of what she was feeling, because he was feeling it too.

            “Glen, I have stretch marks,” she said without any lightening in her tone at all.  She took his free hand and leaned into him ever so slightly as if to say, thanks for the comforting thoughts, anyway.

            “What?”  Glen did not get it, and he made her sit up again so he could look her in the eyes.

            Sandra looked in Glen’s eyes as well and she saw that he really did not get it.  She wondered how he could be so smart and so stupid at the same time.  “Glen, I have a baby.”

            “A baby?”  Glen still did not get it exactly, but his mind began to race.

            “Melissa.  She is two.”  Sandra said, and then it sunk into Glen’s brain and they got quiet.   For a long time they just looked at each other, face to face, living in the privacy of their own minds and feeling ever so much.  At last Glen leaned forward even as she leaned up and they kissed.  She let go of his hand to put her hand behind his head as if she was not going to let him go.  Her lips were moist and warm and everything Glen imagined they would be, and when they finally parted, Sandra was grinning like a woman who got what she wanted.  But then the something between them rose up inside of Glen’s soul and he pulled slowly away and took his arm back in the process.

            “Can I see you tomorrow?”  Glen asked, and then he amended the statement.  “Can I see you and Melissa?”

            “Oh, no,” Sandra tried to protest.  “I could never bring her to school.  People would ask too many questions and I just couldn’t.” 

            “Three O’clock.  It’s Friday and the campus will be empty.  We could walk in the woods so no one would have to see and ask questions.”  The University had natural woods at the back of the campus where nature trails had been made.  They were perfect for just such an adventure.

             Sandra shook her head ever so slightly, no, but she did not say anything, and the look in her eyes certainly said, yes. 

            “Come on.”  Glen prompted knowing that one kiss was never going to be enough.  “You and Melissa.”  He said it with more certainty and Sandra relented as her head began to nod.  She looked down and took both of his hands as if wondering if this might be the one.  She was not ready to go home.  She wanted to spend some more time with him right then, and maybe share everything, but by then the something was very strong in Glen’s spirit and he gently pulled his hands free, picked up his backpack and stepped out of the car.

            “Three O’clock,” he said.  “I’ll meet you beside Haddon House.”  That was the dorm closest to the woods, and Glen closed the car door before Sandra could answer.  He walked away, still feeling her breath in his face and touch of her lips on his, and the back of her hand holding him agreeably which said to him, “Hold me, too and don’t let go,” and he was wondering what he was getting himself into.  Sandra had a baby.

On Stories: Journey Plots: The Rise and The Fall.

All the world’s a stage, as Shakespeare said, and in the course of watching the play, if you watch closely, you will see that some travel on the upward path, some fall calamitously, and some do both and in no particular order.  As so many others have said: life is a journey, and in examining journey plots we must not miss out on where life takes us.

No single story has probably received more derision that the story of Horatio Alger.  Yet as an archetype plotline, no story has likely been copied quite so often.  No film has honestly received more praise than Citizen Kane, yet if you look closely, the thrust of both Horatio Alger and Citizen Kane is the same.  One man, from (relatively) humble beginnings makes good in the world.  The virtue of Citizen Kane was in adding the “Rosebud” ending, but whether or not your character will be content in the end to live a simple, humble life and drive a taxi, only Somerset Maugham knows for sure.

Generally, this plot begins with some kind of Great Expectations.  The upward direction, however, is invariably set by some virtue on the part of the young man or woman that makes us want to see them succeed.  This is true even in this day of ethical relativity.  If the person is a scoundrel motivated by greed, a desire for power or some other “un-virtuous” trait, we shall be waiting for them to receive their come-uppance. 

The downward spiral is then obviously a matter of some vice or corruption of the character and we are satisfied when they collapse before our eyes.  Now, this does not mean the virtue or vice needs to be Horatio Alger obvious.  Unless you are rewriting Pilgrim’s Progress, focus on the attributes is not recommended—but they must be there and self-evident in some way to make the plot really sing.

When the rise and fall are both involved, consider how a man or woman can become corrupted at the top, or how one fallen soul can discover virtue at the bottom of the heap and fight their way back to the top, this time to stay!

The Plot

As with all Journey plots, the stage should be set quickly.  Someone is going to move and indeed must move quickly.  Take the first forty pages of background and set-up and throw it away.  When starting with vice at the top there may be a little space to show how badly this person deserves to fall, but even there the inevitable direction of the journey should be obvious from the start.  If they fall, have a redemptive experience and rise back up again, great.  But the coming fall should be clear from page one.

In the middle, as with all journey plots, there will be obstacles. To quote myself:  “This is where obstacles invariably turn up and the success of the story will to a great extent depend on how well these obstacles are portrayed, how well they relate to the objective and how creative, imaginative and well written the obstacle sequences are.“

In the case of the Rise and Fall, there is a great opportunity to reinforce the deserved direction by moments, words, vignettes, subtle actions that show the virtue or vice of the character rather than tell about it.  These would be sort of like clues in the mystery or thriller plots or points of meaning (direction) in the exploration and discovery plots or near misses in the rescue or escape and pursuit plots.  These might be called points of revelation in the Rise and Fall plots.  Don’t neglect them, especially if the fallen will rise again…

In the end, as with all journey plots, one succeeds or fails.  All journey plots arrive somewhere, even if it is not the intended final destination.  One of the saddest verses in the Bible says, “and he stopped there.”  You see, Abraham’s father, Tera was first called by God to go to the promised land.  He got as far as Haran “and he stopped there.”  So God called his son, Abram, to finish the journey and now Abraham is considered the father of nations, and I bet you did not even know who Tera was…

Traveler: Storyteller Tales: Vordan, the Pajama Party

            “I need to check in and see what the lab has discovered about the equipment we captured.”  Boston changed the subject.  “We had better move fast on devising some countermeasures because it looks like we may have to defend ourselves again.”  She smiled and kissed Lockhart on the head much as Lady Alice had done, and she patted him on the shoulder while she gave one, longing look at Glen like she did not want to miss anything, but she left.

            “I need to arrange a trip to the White House in the morning, I guess.”  Glen turned to Lockhart.  “Would you mind helping with that, or do you have other duties?”

            “Right now, you are my duty,” Lockhart responded.  “And kid, when are you going to start telling rather than asking?”

            “In my next life, no?  Maybe the one after that.”

            Alice looked up from her notes and picked them up along with her laptop.  “I do need to start working on that treaty, though I don’t see how it will help.”  The three of them left together as Belden turned to Ms. Franklin.

            “I need a drink.”.

            It was well into the night before things had calmed down to the point where anyone thought of going home.  Despite her prediction, Bobbi managed to wrap things up well enough by midnight so she could take a break for some sleep.  It was far too late to get rooms in town, so she brought Glen and Alice to the infirmary where there were beds and they set up a partition to separate the boys from the girls.  Glen, Lockhart and Fyodor, who had a home but lived alone and so opted to stay with them, got one side.  Alice, Boston and Bobbi took the other, and it looked like it was going to be a quiet night until the women decided they wanted to talk.  The men tried to ignore them, but the women did not talk long before Alice invaded the men’s side.  She said she had too many questions to sleep, and Boston came because she did not want to miss any of the answers.  Bobbi relented last of all and arrived to ask who brought the marshmallows.

            “That is an interesting piece of clothing you have on.”  Boston noticed.  Glen was wearing what on a glance might have passed for a plain, white undershirt and boxers, but on closer examination it had a sheen to it that no ordinary cloth would have.  When the people brought clothes for them all to sleep in, and fresh clothes for the morning, Glen said, “Thank you,” but he would wear what he had.

            “Fairy Weave.”  Glen named the material.  “It is what I wear under my armor and it is extremely light and comfortable, extremely tough and durable, and extremely versatile.  I can change the color.”   As he spoke the fabric changed from white to blue to red and back to white again.  “I can change the shape and make it appear thicker, more like real clothing.”  The arms of his shirt lengthened to full length and his shirt took on a brown and fuzzy appearance, almost like a winter coat before changing back to a white t-shirt.  “It keeps me warm in winter, and acts almost like air conditioning in the summer, which is great when I’m in chain armor and leather and it is ninety or better outside and humid.”  Glen became introspective, but Alice was not about to leave him alone after that demonstration.

            “Fairy Weave.”  She said.  She had her steno pad with her.  “You don’t mean real fairies, of course.  After all that has happened today, that would just push credibility beyond the beyond.  I’m assuming you mean some different sort of aliens, and that clothing is the result of some fantastic technology, no?”  She was looking around but no one was saying anything until Boston could not contain herself.

            “I always dreamed of fairies when I was young.  I wish I could see one someday.”

            “Young?”  Lockhart looked up from where he was lounging in his bed.  “You mean like last night?”  At least Bobbi smiled.  Boston was the youngster in the group.  Glen imagined she could not have been over twenty-five.

            “You know what I mean,” Boston whispered and stared at Lockhart, but that exchange was overshadowed by Alice’s outburst.

            “You can’t be serious!”

            “Can you think of anything that would mess up history quicker than a bunch of spiritual creatures running around loose in the world?”  Bobbi offered the thought.

            Glen protested quietly.  “Hey!  That’s my line.”

            Bobbi turned to look at Glen.  “As I understand it, he was given responsibility for what he calls his Little Ones when he was first born and he has had to bear that burden ever since.”

            “I think after some six thousand years they have finally gotten the message, though,” Glen added.  “They have no business interfering or even making remote connections with the human world.  I had a few on my crew when I was a Privateer in the West Indies some years back, but really, in the past few hundred years it has only been incidental contacts.”

            “Incidental?”  Fyodor spoke for the first time.

            “Apart from Lincoln’s wife,” Lockhart said, and to Alice he explained in a secretive whisper.  “She’s an elf.”

            “Was,” Bobbi corrected the man.  “But she has been gone for two years now.  I was meaning to ask, but with all that has been going on, it slipped my mind.”

            Glen looked up at the ceiling like he did on the ship at one point.  It was like he was looking for something that only he could see.  “The transformation on Alexis was very thorough, unlike Mirowen, not Doctor Robert’s Mirowen—she’s and elf, too—but you did not know her, the other Mirowen.  Sorry.  I’m not getting anything about where Alexis might be.”

            “Lincoln spent a lot of time looking for her,” Bobbi said.  “Maybe that was why the Vordan picked him up so easily.”

            “Topic, people,” Alice interrupted, loudly.  “We are getting off topic.  I want to hear about the fairies.”

            “Why are you surprised?”  Fyodor asked.

            Alice shook her head.  “I don’t know anymore,” she said flatly.

            “Maybe a story would help,” Glen suggested, and the others were agreeable.  “I would think with this campout, though, wouldn’t you all rather hear a ghost story?”

            “No!”  Bobbi, Lockhart and Fyodor all shouted in unison.  Boston and Alice just looked at each other with yet more questions.

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NOTE: You are welcome to click the tab “Traveler Tales” above and read the story from the beginning.  You can read the whole thing as written or just the Vordan story, or just a short story or two as you please.  Enjoy.

On Stories: Journey Plots: Exploration and Discovery

First, let me say something about my lack of post last week:  life happens.  Just remember, for a storyteller, everything is grist for the mill so it is all good.

Now, as to Journey plots, the interruption could not have been better timed because with this post we transition a bit in our thinking.  Until now, I have presented journey plots that most often are external (action oriented) plots.  These include: the Quest (Indiana Jones and Bilbo Baggins), Escape & Pursuit (Smokey and the Bandit and the Great Escape), The Rescue (Saving Private Ryan and Finding Nemo) and Mysteries & Thrillers (Sherlock Holmes and James Bond)..  With this post, we begin to look at journey plots that are most often internal (character driven) plots, the first of which is Exploration and Discovery.

The exploration and discovery plot, like mysteries and thrillers or pursuit and escape might be seen as two separate plots.  Again, I put them together because they so very often go together. 

True, there are external (action) examples here.  The whole Star Trek universe is rooted in the idea of seeking out new life and new civilizations.  So also Journey to the Center of the Earth is rooted in exploring and discovering.  These more external plots, however are not the crux of the plotline.  Most often the explorations are of human life, society or culture and the discovery is within the person central to the plot. 

In Elie Wiesel’s Night, a story about the holocaust, he explores the depths of man’s inhumanity to man and discovers a reason to live. 

In Gulliver’s Travels, Gulliver explores the South Seas, but in his strange adventures he discovers the nonsense of the political thinking of his day and the foolishness inherent in his society and culture.

In any number of Mark Twain’s books: Innocents Abroad, A Tramp Abroad, Tom Sawyer Abroad, Roughing it, he explores the world, but there are always the lessons to be discovered and brought home.

The Plot:

The plot of exploration and discovery is a particular journey that shares aspects with both mystery and quest plots. 

It shares with mysteries when there are clues to follow that lead to the discovery like some invention or some solution to a problem.  It may start with an unexpected invitation, the discovery of a treasure map, a phone call from a man the protagonist thought was dead. But where it ends… 

It shares with quests in the sense that it often involves the pursuit of something.  It is sometimes called a quest, though it does not involve searching for a known object (person, place or thing).  Instead, the exploration and discovery plot is a quest into  the unknown and often that unknown turns out to be something intangible like the truth or courage or peace or home.  What would the Red Badge of Courage be if he turned out to be a coward?  Where would all those prairie westerns go without arrival in the “west,” or the coming to America saga without a landing at Ellis Island?

In the middle, as with all journey plots, there will be obstacles, getting lost, the dreaded flat tire, but there will also be points of meaning, almost like clues in a mystery.  The reason is because ultimately the story is not about the exotic ports of call in the sea saga, nor mythical Xanadu nor Shangri-La in the Lost Horizons, nor Atlantis, nor any other location, but the discovery that happens inside.  One man explores the seedy underside of London and discovers that he is capable of committing murder…  There is a storyline for you.

True, there are still plenty of adventure stories here, like She or King Solomon’s Mines, but at best in the process of exploration, the characters discover something invaluable about themselves and/or about the human condition.  This is where the exploration and discovery plot comes into its own.  This is where the young man in All Quiet on the Western Front or the other young man in the classic movie, The King of Hearts, explore war and discover their aversion for the whole enterprise.

Next time, the Rise and the Fall, where the discovery is the beginning of the story and we first see how it may end.